Pulse and Bolt

Rise and Shine

May 16th, 2019, 5:37 pm
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Lightfoot May 16th, 2019, 5:37 pm
Considering Annie's missed a lot, and there needs to be a wrap up, I figured I'd have a character fill in Annie and the readers at once. It was originally going to be Annie's father, but I thought Tabitha would be a lot more entertaining. After this long arc of fighting, some humor and silliness seemed useful.
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JFP May 23rd, 2019, 6:24 pm
Love the images. Quick comment on the last panel. The last balloon is redundant. She said, "This floor is devoted to secretly help injured superheroes." Having her also say, "Everything here is kept secret" is redundant because she already said the help is given secretly.
Lightfoot May 23rd, 2019, 7:08 pm
@JFP: Hmm, you're right. I could also just remove "secretly" from the upper bubble.

Maybe keeping it in three bubbles would make easier to digest?
JFP May 23rd, 2019, 7:20 pm
@Lightfoot: Reminds me of this crappy horror movie I watched which had the line, "This secret government agency is secretly funding this top secret project." I pointed that out back when IMDB had film forums and one of the crew members blew up on me. He basically called me a moron who couldn't understand the true art of filmmaking. Hahahaha.